Many walks of life are told through art. My concentration portfolio will consist of the aspect that I find tells the most passionate and in-depth stories of all; black & white photography. My love for people and my fascination with the differing lives led by each individual were the determining factors for my concentration theme, therefore contributing to the central focus of portraying selected characters and their respective stories. ♥ Jordan F
Jordan, these pictures are awesome.Some of the pictures are pixelated, like the one of The green scarf. But I love how you feel like there is a story with each of these people, and the lighting is great in all of them!
ReplyDeleteYour photos are super beautiful! I love how you worked mostly with black and white and then had a pop of color in some of the pictures. Some of the portrait pictures look a little fuzzy but other than that I think your pictures are great!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Hallie! I think your photos are great and I love the little splash of color with the scarfs! A couple of the portraits are a little unfocused but your concentration series is great!
ReplyDeleteI loved how you used color splash on your pictures, makes them that more interesting to see. I agree with the above some do look a little fuzzy and maybe work on that. But I liked them. Nice lighting!!
ReplyDeleteNice job Jordan! I really like how you incorporated your mom's scarfs. This is relates to the real world very well with photography. The only thing I would change is making sure you upload your photos the correct size from picnik, because some of the photos are blurry.
ReplyDeleteI love all of these! You're using alot of the same models though (not that I didn't..) but it would be stronger if you used more models, and I would definetly throw in the picture of your brother it was really strong and by far my favorite!
ReplyDeleteI really love the editing you did with the color. It creates really strong emphasis and lends unity and variety to all of your pieces. My only suggestion would be to find something to leave colorful in the last 3 collages to make complete uniform in your series. And some of the images in your collages look blurry when I view them on my computer, but this could just be a sizing issue that happened in picnik/photoshop. Great work :)
ReplyDeleteYour photos are all very beautiful, and well taken. They all seem very professional for advertisement. The only thing I would change would be the clarity in some of the photos. They are all very good, but could be slightly clearer to make the images even stronger. Great job :)
ReplyDeleteWell taken. I like your theme and the way you edited your photos. There very strong images and clear shoots. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteThese pictures are very good! Your point of view and placement of color in the images is great and very well thought-out. A few of the images are extremely blurry, so they should be re-done.
ReplyDeleteEYES. the eyes are amazing in your photos!! i love your pictures, and the way you edited the colors! the only thing i would work on is the pixelation on some of them because of the editing. But they aer so beautiful!!!
ReplyDeleteThese pictures are very good! I like how you added a little bit of color to some and you added them together very well. I agree that some of them are blurry
ReplyDeleteThese pictures are beautiful! Girl, you got talent!! I love the mood they all give off, and I love the pop of color threwout you pictures!Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI love the the third picture. I think it is just absolutly great. I love how you you had the pictures in black in white but with a pop of color. The only thing is that some of the other pictures are just a tad blurry?fuzzy.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Kayla V. that your photos seam very professional for advertisement. As they have said some of them are a little blurry but that's just a pixle issue. I really love the clearity and emphisis you've captured. Very nice contrast and positioning.
ReplyDeleteI love your pictures, they're so beautiful. You're very talented and I love the detail in your photos and how clear they are. I know you've already heard it, but your pictures are blurry, and I know you're working on fixing that! Great job girly, you'll pull through :)
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